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Tbh i don't mind the cliché, but you're right i would love to see more of Arjen's pov or more of his thoughts.
It kinda give me the feels like "Here's our bby Arien, and oh yeah Arjen too oops" XD Which is a shame since the twins concept is fresh and interesting
Imma be honest at first i thought “twins can be a rlly nice concept” but like i personally saw this kind of story with abuse so much it became kinda dull and the dialogue is kinda cringe.
I also thought this was gonna focus more on the both of them but the focus is mostly on Arien... anyway does it get better or nah cus atm the story feels rlly generic with ‘twins’ being slapped into it