True I feel the same the characters seem lackluster and too one-sided. The current villain is too petty that I don't feel any threat about him it just feels like he's a pathetic whiny child who can't get his toys.
Alas maybe it gets better in the future chapters it's still far too early to judge.
oh you put beautifully in good english, it sounds way more professional that way xD
but yeah exactly!
i tend to give up on mangas easily, but if it turns out good, could you warn me please ?
Sure! Will do (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
thanks !
Hello ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
It's been a long time I'm here to update you of my opinion and final thoughts.
I'm dropping this webtoon it's not for me tbh all the things the mc gets are handed to him in a platter. He's just an op character in this world. I got the kirito vibes and it seems like this can go in a harem direction which is also something i'm not into. It's a matter of my preference if your into that then please do continue to read it.
About the story:
I didn't really care about any of the characters including the mc. It felt like such a fictional mary sue character and he's the only one who has this power as such it just became boring at this point. Even if a villain is to appear it just feels pointless cuz he's too OP anyway. The only development that can excite you or give you a diff feel and sense of danger is the book/his powers gets discovered. But tbh idc either way It was that boring.
This is all my opinion and constructive criticism I know it's hard to make a webtoon story and I respect the author for that.
I hope this helps (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
If your looking for something to read with similar premise.
Check this out:
° http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/reader_chang_han_yoon/
Or
° http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/omniscient_reader_s_viewpoint/
These imo are interesting from the very beginning.
Hope this helps you
hey thanks for dropping by again and the in depth commentary !
i'm not into harem or too op characters, so yeah, good thing i dropped it
i'm already reading 'omniscient reader's viewpoint' and i love it, i'll check out the other one
the characters seem to be too white/black and the story seems pretty cliche
blonde dude is a super asshole to everyone for 'no reason' (ok he likes the girl but it feels pretty cliché) and even to the girl he likes
rn the girl is a bit annoying ? feels like she's just going to be a wallflower for the mc to pick at the end
op is the nice oblivious kinda bullied guy
it's a shame cause the premise seemed pretty cool, to write your experience in the notebook
but i feel like they could have developed that more and added more interesting stuff to it