Its good ig but MC kinda irritates me ngl, he could discreetly use strengthening magic (if that’s a thing in this one) or show his ring (he still works for a ‘noble’ yk) Also he doesn’t HAVE to work for the lord dude, based on previous reactions wtf could the lord do if he decided to leave or rebel? Plus this duel idea is so stupid i cannot believe they agreed to it my god
Its good ig but MC kinda irritates me ngl, he could discreetly use strengthening magic (if that’s a thing in this one) or show his ring (he still works for a ‘noble’ yk) Also he doesn’t HAVE to work for the lord dude, based on previous reactions wtf could the lord do if he decided to leave or rebel? Plus this duel idea is so stupid i cannot believe they agreed to it my god