well she did wrote it in middle school after all...
Her story didn’t get popular. She didn’t even publish it. It was a horny fanfic that she wrote in her journal when she was 13. Sorry that a 13 year old doesn’t know how to write an award winning novel. Maybe you shouldn’t skip parts of the story and then complain when the story makes no sense.
Im sorry. I couldnt realise how rude i wrote. However, i didnt mention about "winning award" and i just told the truth about logic. I agree that the question about how did it become popular was rude, but i still think that if person wants to write story, he or she should still even a little feel what her characters feel.
She was 13. This is a story she wrote in her journal when she was 13. It didn’t get popular. No one besides her even knew about it. Of course she didn’t try to feel what the characters felt. It was supposed to be her horny fanfic dream that she wrote when she was 13.
Oh. Then... yeah... you said the truth. Sorry. Still when o wrote my comment i didnt think it was in her personal journal and she was 13. I mean, it is not like 13 years are not clever (im clearing the possible misunderstanding of teenagers being stupid, i mean, i am a teenager, so im somewhat defending, it was not a sarcasm), it is just it was her journal that she wanted to read by only herself, so i think you were right. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ ╮(￣▽￣)╭
She wasn't the only one who knew about the story her mom knew too ( ° ʖ°)
My point still stands.
Omg so did I... And tbh...if I ended up in any of my books that I wrote at 14, i'd probably shoot myself and be done with it. Cause I know i'd be cringing in every damn scene.
What are you on about? Her story didn't get popular, it was just a private thing she wrote.
She was just a anti social weird child that proably didn't fit in. The story was her fantasy world and she wrote all about the things she wanted. She wanted to be that pretty popular girl.
the things we do when we're babies. Ffs brought back some cringe worthy memories
Truly....
All char AZ cters as re irritating me. Especially author herself, i mean villainess. I just skipped half of that she talked about her story, cause it wss really boring to me. Also, i felt kinda pleasant that author reincarnated as a villainess. Like, who told u to think about yourself? Even when u wrote book, sometimes you should feel or just partially at times think what would this girl be feeling. Like, to make story to be more reali AZ tic and logically she should have at least feel what characters feeling and here is a question - "how just her story became popular without any logic and a little realism?". Sorry author, but this kinda story didnt hold my interest to resd futher especially