ride with no logic and writing badly, yap no thanks. I am fine with romance, but not a bad logic or zero common sense.
I'm sorry, I really dont wanna come off as rude but what exactly are you saying isnt common sense? Her logic is what anyone who has been reborn is. Let's change the story so this doesnt happen. The story was focused on Ain so she doesnt bother or rather doesnt want to get on the bad side of the father.
I'm really sorry, that's just what I'm getting and it makes sense to me and is pretty logical.
logic is especially if you a teacher to children is NEVER BE BIAS! basically try to see the bigger picture - the opposite of this FL.
secondly - know the roots or history of the child you dealing with, how he grew up, what methods the parents used, who is his parents (most of the chance the child will learn from his parents first), his childhood! and Ain already too old to raise him differently. the history of the family and the reasons behind it is also an important factor, so she know what she is dealing with here.
and the era - that yet again the FL totally ignore that and her surrounding.
what does this dumb FL does - ignoring the root of the problem, ignoring the history of the family cause..who cares about that right? and fangirling over a stranger child cause he is pretty. yap a very logical and not dumb at all ╮(￣▽￣)╭
sorry this is NOT how it's work!!
Ah I see yeah I guess you could see it that way. Sorry for the late reply.
It makes more sense if you look at it from that sense, a more logical person would think of that although I think most people dont see it as you do. I think a lot of us are just here with a mindset of shes just trying to prevent what ever bad comes in the story that she had read.
Although what does bother me is a lot of these stories seem to make their Fl forget the butterfly affect is very much real. If I was thrusted into say this story after reading the ending I would try to subtly change outcomes. However I'd constantly be remembering that any little thing I do could cause a big ripple in the story.
Her not recognizing this bothers me a lot, however I do think if i was say thrusted into a world that i know a character is either gravely abused or whatever I'd completely forget this and go to save them. I think shes more of a do now questions later type of person.
I was thinking about it cause the story to remind us all the time, not just once that she is a kindergarten teacher or something like that ╮(￣▽￣)╭ if you by any means working with kids this is common sense! just saying.
and her believing all kids are "angel with no sins" show the writing is of a very young writer that don't know shit about kids or work with them.
Ah children are devil's in disguise, I'm going to be taking a course next year that will hopefully allow me to go in and work with the elementary students in my district. And from what I've learned from my cousins are they can be a saint but more than likely they are scheming.
Though this could just be that my town isnt the brightest when it comes to being nice (￣∇￣")
But I completely understand how you view this, I'm only a highschool student so itll be a difference in how we see this as I'm still considered a child
I won't say they are devils or angels, they are little humans with feelings and bad sides and good sides. their family story is most of the time very important, I work in a kindergarten helper for a year and I can tell you, they are not angels but they not that bad either. they are who they are and you deal with it ╮(￣▽￣)╭ it makes me angry how bad this story logic is since I work in the field.
I see, I can only wish you good luck with your work. I hope you won't take anything from this bad writing story about kids.
Ah I didnt mean it literally lol, they can be sweet I just would prefer working with middle schoolers or high schoolers. I get really awkward around children.
And I'll be sure not to, I can tell that they dont really know how children act but then again it is fiction so i dont take most things to heart ^^
Well, I've been reading for most of my life and sadly I can say this isnt the worst is a good story to me I also have shit taste lol
YES! THIS!
At first, I was reading this story because i was looking forward to the mother-son relationship -- so basically the family aspect more than the romance. But I just got so bothered by the FL's personality that I couldn't even finish reading the chapter I was on. Like it made my stomach churn and gave me the chills. Just thinking about her actions and personality makes me frustrated. I just dropped the whole thing afterwards but came back to check the comments. But you've managed to put into words exactly what I was so bothered by.
you welcome ^_^ I'm glad I help you as well
I see ^^ that's okay, either way, good luck to you (⌒▽⌒)
Man so many people are dropping a good story, this one has romance as a secondary factor! Like what more could I ask for I'm so tired of romance being shoved into my face in these storys. In nice and refreshing to see it just focus on raising Ain.
After all the original story she read Ain was the villain, not her or the Dad. She is clearly only trying to keep Ain from going down that path. But here we see her work actually coming to play.
So if yalls gonna drop it cause it dont make sense fine, just know that it's not one of those storys that pushes its story fastly. Your either here for the ride or you ain't. Simple as that