Great story, but the relationships are underdeveloped :((.

Tenpura June 4, 2020 9:43 am

I really love this story and the way it turned out, but I think everything happened too quickly. I still don’t really know WHY Kangwoo loves Doyoon or why he was interested in the first place. The author didn’t really develop their relationship and that kind of bothers me. We know why Doyoon came to like Kangwoo because of all the affection,care, and support hes shown. But I still don’t know why Kangwoo is so obsessed with Doyoon. Yes Doyoon is Kangwoos type, but for him to threaten Doyoon in order for him to date him I was like huh??? Why was he so attached to Doyoon besides him being cute like when/why did this attraction turn into love?? So yea, great story with amazing characters, but their relationships just felt underdeveloped in my opinion. I wanna see more communication between the characters instead of sex scenes.

Responses
    Kerriiiii June 4, 2020 10:46 pm

    Omg I love your comment! TOTALLLY EXPRESSED WHAT I WAS feeling. I thought I was the only one. ヾ(☆▽☆).

    Tenpura June 5, 2020 1:38 am
    Omg I love your comment! TOTALLLY EXPRESSED WHAT I WAS feeling. I thought I was the only one. ヾ(☆▽☆). Kerriiiii

    I’m so glad someone else agrees T_T. I was wondering why no one was mentioning this.

    Kerriiiii June 6, 2020 1:56 pm
    I’m so glad someone else agrees T_T. I was wondering why no one was mentioning this. Tenpura

    Pffft haha didn’t realize I had actually responded to you in the previous comment. I guess some people here aren’t expecting much anymore cuz thats how most of these yaoi webtoons are nowadays. < had to be careful with what I say. (⊙…⊙ ) which is can be applied to me too. BUT I think this series CAN DO so much better or I just HAD high expectations for it. First the artwork of this series is TOP NOTCH! Gorgeous characters! ITS JUST MISSING 2 IMPORTANT THINGS! 1st: A better plot that shows character development or ATLEAST I HATE TO SAY IT, put in some cheesy aspects of romance into this. It could be anything that people IN LOVE would do for one another or etc. (aside from sex) Or disclose like past history or reason why the director fell head over heels for the uke. HIM being cute doesn’t really do justice for me. :0 (Which you already mentioned it but for me I don’t really feel that much romantic feelings coming from the main pair.) 2nd: actual communication. Like if the seme didn’t always seem to be horny all the time, he could have had several conversations with the uke abt this and that. (But in my opinion it’s both parties fault. Because ones too forceful (seme) and ones (Uke) not clear/too submissive. Tho I believe that the director has communicated his feelings clearly in this series.< all his emotions were fresh as fuck. A MAN CRYING= breaks my heart ) Then maybe we the readers would understand their relationship more. Ahh there so much to say.. I’m gonna stoop here for now.... ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~