Hmm... It has potential but...

Katra1212 May 31, 2020 5:45 am

The art is gorgeous but the characters expression are so stiff. It hardly shows change of emotion. It's like when the artist creates a character design then showing it in different angles. It's kinda awkward. The expression has to evoke emotions. Shading, brows alignement, mouth shaping, lighting, color refracturing of the eye, eyes natural changing shape would really help. I feel that the artist is indeed trying to incorporate it but is still quite amateur. I wonder how this manhua would improve later on. I wish to see 50+ chapters of it and see the difference.

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    Mochimchim May 31, 2020 6:07 am

    I think why it's so stiff it's because they use Adobe illustrator instead of Photoshop for the coloring that's why it looked a bit stiff. But it's just my speculation ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    yu_uan May 31, 2020 6:12 am

    aaa i completely agree with you i was wondering why the look on their faces seemed very repetitive and flat

    geeaieiandgee May 31, 2020 2:02 pm

    Agree
    If the characters have no expression, they look totally fine, but when there’s any expression on their faces it just looks so stiff and unnatural
    The plot seems interesting, if only the author could work on the characters’ expression, this manhwa would be great

    hexcolor May 31, 2020 5:02 pm

    Why? Are you an illustrator yourself?

    Mochimchim May 31, 2020 6:45 pm
    Why? Are you an illustrator yourself? hexcolor

    I use illustrator but in a different way. My friend took graphic design and one of their project is to make a a portrait of themself and it look just like this