It's not bad, I like how the story is going. I would have been disappointed to see them be...

Easy May 25, 2020 4:13 pm

It's not bad, I like how the story is going. I would have been disappointed to see them being together just like that.

Cole doesn't know what is love and doesn't believe in love. He only knows about pleasure.

He didn't realize why Alex has been with him until now and that's normal bc they didn't talk about their feelings.

It was unclear for Cole who always saw Alex surrounded with women and decided impulsively to give it a try with him.

"How could a popular handsome man love someone who was thinking of ending his life at one point?" This is exactly why he felt more at ease with Brad who wasn't this much eye-catching and seems more down-to-earth/ same interests, etc.

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    Kirsha May 25, 2020 5:06 pm

    That doesn't justify his actions. I mean you can say all the psychologically correct reasons for his low self esteem and self worth and it would still not justify cheating. Come on now if you feel unsure on something you step back and think about it like a fucking adult! You dont go around cheating on your partner just because you feel at ease with someone else!

    Easy May 25, 2020 5:57 pm
    That doesn't justify his actions. I mean you can say all the psychologically correct reasons for his low self esteem and self worth and it would still not justify cheating. Come on now if you feel unsure on som... Kirsha

    Yeah I know, you're absolutely right. I just wanted to point out that he didn't cheat proudly but bc of his negative past experiences. And more importantly, I wrote this comment bc I wasn't satisfied at first with the flow of the story, their relationship wasn't moving in a healthy pace. Are they in love ?

    They became a pair out of the blue. I was confused about their feelings for each other so seeing him cheat doesn't make me surprised but satisfied, "oh the author was taking into account their personalities, that's great, he is,'t rushing the story"

    geladono May 25, 2020 6:00 pm
    That doesn't justify his actions. I mean you can say all the psychologically correct reasons for his low self esteem and self worth and it would still not justify cheating. Come on now if you feel unsure on som... Kirsha

    I dont think @Easy was trying to justify Cole's actions tho? Don't get me wrong, i hate cheating too, in real life and in fiction. But yeah not everyone has common sense to not cheat (as also seen in real life because damn there are a lot of cheaters) and i think that's what the author wants to show?? Idk. Just an assumption tho hahaha

    Easy May 25, 2020 6:10 pm
    I dont think @Easy was trying to justify Cole's actions tho? Don't get me wrong, i hate cheating too, in real life and in fiction. But yeah not everyone has common sense to not cheat (as also seen in real life ... geladono

    Thank youuu, maybe there was room to be confused with my comment but I don't agree with cheating at all lol. I just thought that the situation is logical given Cole's personnality/past experiences.

    geladono May 25, 2020 6:57 pm
    Thank youuu, maybe there was room to be confused with my comment but I don't agree with cheating at all lol. I just thought that the situation is logical given Cole's personnality/past experiences. Easy

    You're welcome♡♡ I totally get you because it was too rushed or unrealistic? In a way for me how they got together at first. You know, like too cliche almost because the flow was just like majority of other yaoi manga which was kinda boring tbh so yeah i also like how this is going even though i hate cheating because damn they both need character development and if this will help, then by all means author, continue what you're doing.