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U do know what was just the first chapter right?? Do u expect a character to have character development in just one chapter when there are still SOOO many left? Every character has their own flaws bc that's part of the story. He isn't supposed to be perfect in the beginning. The author purposely wanted him to be that kind of character. Without character flaws, all of the characters would just be Mary Sues.
I just read one chapter, and that was enough for me. The slap he gave her shocked me.