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Now this here is what we call "constructive criticism". Good job, mate. Finally one person that doesn't justify everything with the phrase "yaoi logic".
Thanks! Happy to be of service ;-)
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Don't understand why all his coworkers say he's a "strict devil"...
He has every right to complain if someone makes a lot of mistakes at work, is careless, thoughtless, and seems to be ignoring the deadline. If there are numerous problems and mistakes then you aren't doing your job properly and should be corrected. It inconveniences everybody in the end, and could even put the company's reputation in danger- or at the very least your personal lives and salaries. He said it in a calm way, didn't over exaggerate, insult, or demean him, and even said please and thank you. Seems like a pretty decent boss to me.....
Sex scenes were sloppy, and weirdly drawn. The affection between them was WAY too fast even for Yaoi- it's one thing to enjoy sex and feels some intimacy from it, but they went from annoyed coworker and indifferent boss- to boyfriends in one day! The hell?! ┑(￣Д ￣)┍