Okay, don't get me wrong, I think this is super cute, I'm definitely going to finish it because I love Ivan. But as I read I feel like I keep having to ask myself wtf is going on because the timeline of thing just isn't clear. Like in one chapter he's like I get the feeling something bad is going to happen, then in the next frame he's having sex with Ivan and then in another like three frames he's having sex with Alek? There are several chapters where I just sit there like uhhh ??? how did we get here???
Okay, don't get me wrong, I think this is super cute, I'm definitely going to finish it because I love Ivan. But as I read I feel like I keep having to ask myself wtf is going on because the timeline of thing just isn't clear. Like in one chapter he's like I get the feeling something bad is going to happen, then in the next frame he's having sex with Ivan and then in another like three frames he's having sex with Alek? There are several chapters where I just sit there like uhhh ??? how did we get here???