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I agree. It was a simple story and it was cute. But Niel’s doubts were groundless after Jensen made it obvious he was interested.
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I agree. It was a simple story and it was cute. But Niel’s doubts were groundless after Jensen made it obvious he was interested.
First of all, my eyes kept seeing Kang Daniel and Park Jihoon! Whew. Moving on.
Jensen was written too perfectly to the point that Neil has become annoying (that's kinda disappointing since this meant to be about him and Neil) . I didnt mean to be sensitive about Neil jumping to conclusions when he saw Risa and Jensen but he couldve at least hear him out. And when Jensen went to his apartment? Why did he interrogate Jensen instead of apologizing like he did after Jensen unnecessarily apologized? Suddenly, all the good things I felt for Neil was thrown out of the window and I didnt like feeling that way because Im doing him injustice. I dont want to hate Neil just for that but Jensen was always quick to compromise which highlighted Neil's selfishness too much.
Also, Im aware that the plot is weak but having read too many complicated and frustrating stories before this gave me a good break. Even if it was only because of Jensen. Like, Im just happy that he's happy.