Honestly, the step sibling kink aside, this really wasn't very good. IT DID HAVE POTENTIAL, BUT. squandered it on a directionless plot and characters that were somehow both annoyingly stubborn and paradoxically indecisive.
The plot was convoluted and unnecessarily difficult, nobody's damn motivations made any damn sense (or (at least they weren't really fleshed out enough to make sense) and worse it didn't feel like there was any satisfying conclusion to a whole tom fuckery of nonsense.
ALSO Fuck that Rena girl, she can honestly get hit by a bus, like I know we're supposed to feel bad for her because of her situation, but having a shitty homelife is unfortunately not an excuse to destroy someone's elses life. She's just as bad, if not worse than her mother. TO BE PERFECTLY HONEST her ENTIRE back story and arc was absolutely superfluous.
Save yourself the time and the trouble, read through the comments and spoil this one for yourselves dudes, it only made me mad to read lmao.
Honestly, the step sibling kink aside, this really wasn't very good. IT DID HAVE POTENTIAL, BUT. squandered it on a directionless plot and characters that were somehow both annoyingly stubborn and paradoxically indecisive.
The plot was convoluted and unnecessarily difficult, nobody's damn motivations made any damn sense (or (at least they weren't really fleshed out enough to make sense) and worse it didn't feel like there was any satisfying conclusion to a whole tom fuckery of nonsense.
ALSO Fuck that Rena girl, she can honestly get hit by a bus, like I know we're supposed to feel bad for her because of her situation, but having a shitty homelife is unfortunately not an excuse to destroy someone's elses life. She's just as bad, if not worse than her mother. TO BE PERFECTLY HONEST her ENTIRE back story and arc was absolutely superfluous.
Save yourself the time and the trouble, read through the comments and spoil this one for yourselves dudes, it only made me mad to read lmao.