This is okay, but...

Fujocchi May 14, 2020 7:14 am

Actually, the plot for this story is actually good. Unfortunately, somehow some of scene from this manga is kinda too rush. Like, from this scene and then move from that scene, it end. Soon after that, different scene come up and it end up so fast without so much more intense scene come up. And it's makes me except more. Even the scene where Yuka get pregnant is confusing Like ... why he's belly is so small that I can't get to see he's pregnant at all?

I think this story could turn out better if the pace could be more stable.

Well, sorry. It's just my opinion. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Hope to see Rin and Taiga got their happy ending.

Responses
    Havenlylaw May 14, 2020 7:44 am

    Maybe the budget is insufficient ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Fujocchi May 14, 2020 9:37 am
    Maybe the budget is insufficient ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ Havenlylaw

    ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ Right.