Rewrite the end

E.G June 10, 2020 7:04 am

I will rewrite the ending so it makes more sense to me. When lauren said i love you, chip will reply i knowed then walk away. This relationship is just toxic with so much red flags.
Seriously i have issuse with the author cmt too. Chip is no way a hypocrite. He works at the bar totally professional. He waited for the man he love to fullfill his need physically. He really care abt lauren outside physical sex. And the reason he cheated is he was unfullfiling, lonely in his own relationship with smo dont bother to talk to him abt problems, who values his friends more than chip.

I was hoping after they got back i got to see some changed, but no the end and pretend it is a happy ever after? No
One thing this story does right is showing how real life toxic relationships are, and people can make the same mistake twice.

Responses
    Biatch June 6, 2020 5:24 am

    Meant to upvote

    Saphfire July 2, 2020 5:18 am

    So they get back together in the end, then? What was the point of all of that?