except for the last chapter, this story is too childish for me. too many logic errors. ı ...

ozmodeon May 9, 2020 2:51 pm

except for the last chapter, this story is too childish for me. too many logic errors. ı won't be reading more,sorry.

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    agathe May 11, 2020 9:53 am

    Duh, i thought that was the worse of them : why would you need to abuse a character that badly to make i…what ? … interesting ? … deep ? …broken ? … physically damaged and mentally sick ? (<- No doubt ?)
    It’s not even one bit original, and it is so easy to forget how screwed up one can be with the most ordinary circumstances …
    Seriously i get you could find the beginning simple, but what’s so great about the last chapter ??

    ozmodeon May 11, 2020 3:43 pm
    Duh, i thought that was the worse of them : why would you need to abuse a character that badly to make i…what ? … interesting ? … deep ? …broken ? … physically damaged and mentally sick ? (<- No do... agathe

    ı didn't say the last episode was great. I mean, this chapter is less childish.

    OnionSenpai May 11, 2020 3:59 pm

    Lmao I ran to the comments after the 10th or so chapter to see if anyone thought the same. I'm glad I wasn't the only one.
    When she asked the emperor to pay more attention to people getting married cause they do it mostly because of their parents and not out of love I literally lost it
    What are you 5???
    And then when she summoned the holy beast to showcase her powers (or usefulness on the battlefield), she used the one that can create flowers or whatever? And emperor was like wow amazing??? laughable
    S

    ozmodeon May 11, 2020 4:51 pm
    Lmao I ran to the comments after the 10th or so chapter to see if anyone thought the same. I'm glad I wasn't the only one. When she asked the emperor to pay more attention to people getting married cause they d... OnionSenpai

    ivona;*breaths*

    everyone in the mansion,emperor,devil king;WOW I UNDERSTAND NOW WHY DUKE CHOOSE HER



    I don't want to make too much fun of it but asdfksshhsj

    OnionSenpai May 11, 2020 6:15 pm
    ivona;*breaths*everyone in the mansion,emperor,devil king;WOW I UNDERSTAND NOW WHY DUKE CHOOSE HERI don't want to make too much fun of it but asdfksshhsj ozmodeon

    Literally an embodiment of Mary Sue

    ozmodeon May 11, 2020 6:47 pm
    Literally an embodiment of Mary Sue OnionSenpai

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    will May 16, 2020 12:23 am
    Literally an embodiment of Mary Sue OnionSenpai

    tbh my biggest problem with this so far is that they put her for as this BAMF magic user, and now, in order to make the ML stronger than her, they are removing her bamfness.... like why do you have to drag you female characters down huh???

    ozmodeon May 16, 2020 2:28 am
    tbh my biggest problem with this so far is that they put her for as this BAMF magic user, and now, in order to make the ML stronger than her, they are removing her bamfness.... like why do you have to drag you... will

    they don't want to do it cuz if they do it ml is going to cry until next chapter :( uw how sad .jokes aside ,its so cliche and ı'm used to it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭