ugh i dont know why but this story just rubs me the wrong way.
Everyone exept Thione and the other girl who's with her are so annoyinggggg
The ml is just so...sparkly?? in the wrong sense?? this isnt twilight, tone it down. He acts all "oresama" and leaves the girls in the middle of their dates and insists on following mc. He acts all "look at me, im so smart, and handsome, and sparkly and look at my weird angled poses nobody in their right mind would make in real life"
and then the mc is just...slightly...very stupid. Shes so freaking expresive and it kinda feals like a copy of bakarina gone wrong.
Also, the last part. Its reaaaally easy to lie, but five digital coockies says she isnt going to, and if she does, its gonna come out wrong. Just tell him its none of his business, or that you have reasons to believe she is trying to seduce certain males but keep it vague. VAGUE.
I know i'll probably get hate for this, but i just feel like the way they managed this story was just plain...bad.
ugh i dont know why but this story just rubs me the wrong way.
Everyone exept Thione and the other girl who's with her are so annoyinggggg
The ml is just so...sparkly?? in the wrong sense?? this isnt twilight, tone it down. He acts all "oresama" and leaves the girls in the middle of their dates and insists on following mc. He acts all "look at me, im so smart, and handsome, and sparkly and look at my weird angled poses nobody in their right mind would make in real life"
and then the mc is just...slightly...very stupid. Shes so freaking expresive and it kinda feals like a copy of bakarina gone wrong.
Also, the last part. Its reaaaally easy to lie, but five digital coockies says she isnt going to, and if she does, its gonna come out wrong. Just tell him its none of his business, or that you have reasons to believe she is trying to seduce certain males but keep it vague. VAGUE.
I know i'll probably get hate for this, but i just feel like the way they managed this story was just plain...bad.