Fan webtoon or not

MsEpic May 3, 2020 4:44 am

I was thinking of making a fan-manga (I'm a webtoon artist btw) about Ikuya encountering an Enigma Named Kazue who's fully aware of what kind of person Ikuya is and decides to violate him, traumatized and humiliated, Ikuya kept the incident to himself wanting to forget that it ever happened, however unknown to him he's become an omega.
Until Ikuya Experience his first heat Nearly gang raped only to be saved by the very Enigma who destroyed his Alphahood. (he is very possessive when it comes to his human sex toys) they mated because of his heat, he ran away the next morning, but not before beating the Egnima into unconsciousness while he slept cause he's a dick.
Three months later he found out to be pregnant and basically went through the five stages of grief practically wrecking everything in sight in his apartment before he broke down completely, sobbing as reality finally hit him that he's an omega, very thing he hates most.

At first, he wanted to get rid of it, erase all trace that he's an omega... but, when he heard his baby's heartbeat for the very first time, a strange yet surreal sensation of warmth started to well up inside of him... He doesn't how to describe this feeling, this sensation felt completely new to him. And yet, he welcomes it, like he finally found something missing in his life, something worthwhile, worth living for. He doesn't want to lose it. After much debating in his head, he decides to keep the baby.

What do you guys think? You can even revise it.

Responses
    Tivona May 3, 2020 4:47 am

    I think it sounds interesting and i defiantly want to read it.

    SayerSong May 3, 2020 5:04 am

    Go for it!

    i make muffins May 3, 2020 5:19 am

    yeah i will totally read it just say when you will show it

    MsEpic May 3, 2020 5:52 am
    yeah i will totally read it just say when you will show it i make muffins

    Any ideas of what to do with Ikuya, besides the one I have up.

    i make muffins May 3, 2020 7:12 am
    Any ideas of what to do with Ikuya, besides the one I have up. MsEpic

    maybe he live a rest of his life being miserable and cant find a job because of his reputation being destroyed or like your story that a enigma voilates him and he now undersands the struggle of being omega and being a mom and cant find a job because
    being omega is hard

    MsEpic May 3, 2020 7:26 am
    I think it sounds interesting and i defiantly want to read it. Tivona

    Any ideas of what to do with Ikuya, besides the one I have up. I'm just pitching my own ideas

    MsEpic May 3, 2020 7:27 am
    Go for it! SayerSong

    Any ideas of what to do with Ikuya, besides the one I have up. I'm just pitching my own ideas

    SayerSong May 3, 2020 9:58 am

    Perhaps take it one step further in that, due to his sudden shift from Alpha to Omega, he is unable to have an abortion because it is too risky. Have that happen and him have to suffer a bit more and gradually learn to love the child inside himself rather than just a sudden 180 at the heartbeat.

    SayerSong May 3, 2020 10:06 am

    Also, he has to try to hide himself and the child from Enigma (because his “pride” refuses to see Enigma as a possible mate), and as such goes on the run where he REALLY learns first hand how badly Omegas are treated and how badly HE treated them. Perhaps even meeting a few that suffered at the hands of Alphas, but are there to help him and his child. Gradually he also becomes friends with them, as they even continue to aid him and stick by his side even after they find out the truth about him and his past, whereas his two alpha buddies had turned on him.

    MsEpic May 3, 2020 10:19 am
    Also, he has to try to hide himself and the child from Enigma (because his “pride” refuses to see Enigma as a possible mate), and as such goes on the run where he REALLY learns first hand how badly Omegas a... SayerSong

    Wanna see Ikuya's crying face?

    SayerSong May 3, 2020 10:38 am
    Wanna see Ikuya's crying face? MsEpic

    Kinda sorta, yeah.

    MsEpic May 3, 2020 10:50 am
    MsEpic May 3, 2020 1:24 pm
    MsEpic May 3, 2020 10:37 pm
    Kinda sorta, yeah. SayerSong

    What do you think is it webtoon material or what? I want to know if it's good enough

    SayerSong May 4, 2020 2:00 am
    What do you think is it webtoon material or what? I want to know if it's good enough MsEpic

    Yes. And if you are ever interested in collaborating on a webtoon, I have a great and detailed story line. Just that my art isn’t up to par atm.

    MsEpic May 4, 2020 2:44 am
    https://imgur.com/FBluVH3 MsEpic

    Well when I do draw webtoon for others for commissions.