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I feel the same way it seemed like Pray was still pretending to some extent as well and I liked Jamil so much better
Ikr (┳Д┳) ty for understanding
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I feel the same way it seemed like Pray was still pretending to some extent as well and I liked Jamil so much better
Ikr (┳Д┳) ty for understanding
Ok sooo Jan is a helluva brat and I was hoping Jamil wouldn't be so friggen submissive with him Π_Π also the author favored Pray more than Jamil you could just tell. I totally don't mind the poly but like at least make it seem like Jan hasn't lost his story with Jamil @ the end of the story. So many small extra things and tweaks could've been done to show full progress with both. I liked the story tho, ig I'd have written it a bit differently. Also I really want to chain up Jan and gag him since he complains so much ahaaaaa >:)