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I don't know what you were meaning with the church but churches were like that in the past and this is set in the past(?). Also, the prince hasn't noticed he can't get everything he wants because it's never been true for him.
I have so much I wanna say but...geez, firstly, this is so good. Every moment had me begging for more. Second, what the heck church?! I'm religious and this isn't even what we're like. Far from it. This is that olden times obsession with correcting people in terms of using God as their scapegoat. I hate when people do that. It makes the real religious ones look bad. You can't keep using God to justify your actions. It's sneaky and wrong on so many levels, natural and spiritual. Third, the Prince...boi I can't even with him. Just because you're a prince doesn't mean you can have whatever you want. And lastly, poor Nora. He truly doesn't deserve to get treated like this. He deserves so much love. Lots of it. Okay, rant over. I can't wait to see the next chapter.