Mmm hard pass but the art work is great the concept is good and there but the way the conc...

Walrus Bomb April 26, 2020 10:56 pm

Mmm hard pass but the art work is great the concept is good and there but the way the concept got put togther is iffy. Just from what I saw for chapter 0. Not really my cup of tea but I'd have to read a lol bit more. Who knows ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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    mercisha June 15, 2020 10:08 pm

    What do ya think so far?

    Walrus Bomb June 16, 2020 5:16 am

    Still not my cup of tea although they did do a good in my mind of making mc more not adapt to the situation of sorts. But then they brushed it off. And it's a bit clingy into the yaoi or boy love aspect of things. Like he first assumes hes coming on to him etc... I dont know still not really my cup of tea. Also I just perfer a bit more background in the beging if the story instead of it just jumping in to things. So far I got hes general, his name, and he's dead? Or died in a battle? I dont think I'll continue reading cause by there first interaction I just dont see there chemistry or their person I guess. Then again it's only been 1 chapter and I have read worse.... But it just doesnt hook me in. It doesnt leave woth an anchor to stay with and I dont usally read things without one. I say they really brush of the transmigration and why he was in the tub and they could of milked the first chapter more. Still only one chapter really in so I dont really have a leg to stand on here. I'll try and read till chapter 5 to see if it changes. But for starting out this isnt that bad and can intreasting some I'm just into more detailed things. Cause my stupid ass doesnt like asking question and not getting answers. Next chapter looks like it shows him using a computer of sorts but he was still a little bit off on the lights in which they brushed off. Its still very rare that a reverse transmigration happens though. Any doesnt have enough chapter to have a full thought of it yet.

    mercisha June 16, 2020 1:46 pm
    Still not my cup of tea although they did do a good in my mind of making mc more not adapt to the situation of sorts. But then they brushed it off. And it's a bit clingy into the yaoi or boy love aspect of thin... Walrus Bomb

    ah okay. thanks for the reply, and a very unbiased one at that! stating your opinion but still explaining this from an objective standpoint. i'm gonna give it a try... just when I have more time to waste on slightly iffy stories lol