Kudos to those who finished reading

FD0 April 26, 2020 9:19 am

Im the type to value how stories begin because that's basically the hook line of the story. For me, the build up was quick and didn't establish the foundation of the story. the characters are given qualities that aren't explained nor justified. Wolves? Foxes? Both are predators but their relationship isnt explained. besides, why is the uke so hung up with a picture and why is the seme given attributes of being alpha who is protective even if there isnt anything to protect his pack from when he preyed on that fox who just wanted to mate.

no, it doesnt make me curious, it disappoints me because i cant focus on their actions given that they arent justified.

well, thats my opinion anyway.

Responses
    Cookies April 28, 2020 1:27 am

    Exactly!! Sad example of great art and weak plot. Feels like the most basic yaoi story ever, but look! There are Foxes and Wolves! For some reason....

    Jade April 29, 2020 8:31 pm

    Well said, thumbs up.
    The art is beautiful though - I was able to enjoy that, at least.