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Nana April 23, 2020 4:01 am

Aight, I’m probably gonna get a lot of hate for this, but am I the only one who didn’t like this story? It just felt too rushed for me, and the uke fell in love way too quickly, like at first he was mad/scared because the seme raped him but then he just magically fell in love with him when he realized the seme might have feelings for him... Like how? The uke fell in love with him because he noticed that when the seme was raping him, he made sure that the uke “felt good” instead of taking care of himself first? That’s supposed to show the seme’s love for him? Idek, that entire scene was just bizarre. Honestly, where tf is the development in this? The plot just jumped all over the place. I’m not even mad about the rape because I’ve (sadly) already gotten used to seeing it in these kinds of stories, but bruh, that ain’t love. Also, the fact that the seme paid off the uke’s “friends” and created an entire fake life was just brushed aside and never brought up again? The seme’s creepiness was really downplayed too. It just felt like the author couldn’t decide whether to go down the horror/psychological route, or the fluffy/cute route for the story.

The art was great though, the plot was just kinda meh for me. It’s not really realistic, but then again, this is a yaoi manga, no one’s really here to read something realistic lol.

Responses
    Nana April 23, 2020 4:05 am

    Ohh and I forgot to mention, the uke’s personality changed so suddenly, it just came out of nowhere :/. It’s not like it’s a bad story I guess, it just needed better execution or maybe Moreno chapters in order to flesh out the setting and characters a little more. I do appreciate the author and translator’s hard work though!

    Nana April 23, 2020 4:05 am
    Ohh and I forgot to mention, the uke’s personality changed so suddenly, it just came out of nowhere :/. It’s not like it’s a bad story I guess, it just needed better execution or maybe Moreno chapters in ... Nana

    *more... damn you autocorrect T^T

    StuckinStimulations April 23, 2020 4:16 am

    I didn't like it either. I stopped reading. Nothing about it is new and the rape doesn't help. I think I hate sex now