it's a decent story. I wish the abilities of the cube, the importance of it, and the overall world were a little more clear. I'm not particularly sure of why no one cares that he can now use three abilities, or why does he not care about the cube. first thing i would ask when waking up is "are my friends alright? where is the cube?" or is it something that's just with him all the time? anyways. this could play out alright, but the story seems wishy washy. it seems good, but some of the things that need to be very clear basically aren't. the main characters also seems to be lacking basic skills to ask basic questions, like who is the guy is the cloak? and if he isn't asking them, i want to know why he isn't.
it's a decent story. I wish the abilities of the cube, the importance of it, and the overall world were a little more clear. I'm not particularly sure of why no one cares that he can now use three abilities, or why does he not care about the cube. first thing i would ask when waking up is "are my friends alright? where is the cube?" or is it something that's just with him all the time? anyways. this could play out alright, but the story seems wishy washy. it seems good, but some of the things that need to be very clear basically aren't. the main characters also seems to be lacking basic skills to ask basic questions, like who is the guy is the cloak? and if he isn't asking them, i want to know why he isn't.