I can’t believe I’m going to say this but the later half has TOO MUCH PLOT Σ(  ̄□�...

daydreamer April 10, 2020 11:30 pm

I can’t believe I’m going to say this but the later half has TOO MUCH PLOT Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

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    Scarlett April 10, 2020 11:37 pm

    As in should I continue or not?? Good plot or bad plot??

    daydreamer April 10, 2020 11:55 pm
    As in should I continue or not?? Good plot or bad plot?? Scarlett

    As in bad plot.
    The change of tone was to abrupt. The first half was too shallow for me to care enough to for the characters and be interested in the drama.

    daydreamer April 10, 2020 11:57 pm

    Basically, the bad writing was not a problem when this was just about the MC wanting to fuck his boss. But now it shows.