Decent Story but Felt Rushed

OpiSin March 27, 2020 2:32 am

As with a lot of Harlequin translated romances... The development of the stories tends to quite rushed towards the end. Often an epilogue is soooo badly needed

A decent story that could've used waayyyy more interaction between the ML & FL tbh.

Flowery art that I liked though haha.

Responses
    MayDay March 29, 2020 4:17 pm

    Would have understood better if they decide to become bf and gf instead of going straight into marriage just wanting to get to know each other better for a start is also a good ending to short story, right?

    SayerSong May 31, 2021 12:06 am
    Would have understood better if they decide to become bf and gf instead of going straight into marriage just wanting to get to know each other better for a start is also a good ending to short story, right? MayDay

    That I can agree with.

    manga-neko June 28, 2021 9:41 pm
    Would have understood better if they decide to become bf and gf instead of going straight into marriage just wanting to get to know each other better for a start is also a good ending to short story, right? MayDay

    Yes. Dating is the more plausible and logical conclusion than jumping straight into marriage (which actually doesn't make any sense whatsoever with this story).