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i feel like it could be something interesting, but the chapters are so dang short you get almost no content before it's over. i see some interesting potential here - it just needs more depth and longer chapters!
beta
It's all right but there is nothing to really hook you. The story is just starting out but the mc doesn't have much of a personality, the other characters are just as bland so far. Mc took in a kid but I didn't feel like it was heartwarming or interesting. Stale events and dialogue. Not really interested rn ╮(￣▽￣)╭