Until Chapter 60: Awesome! Then: meh...

Liz March 19, 2020 10:26 pm

I really loved the story so far, but in the last few chapters it tried way to hard to show one plot twist after another - it felt unnatural and then it felt rushed, like "let's make it a happy end for everyone even if it didn't make sense".
I don't know, the story was a 10, but especially the last 9-12 chapters turned it into a 8 and that's just sad ( ̄∇ ̄")

It also felt like the author of the story changed, it started so brillant and the end didn't really connect to the hints given in the first half of the story - does someone know more about the author and this work?

Responses
    maychan March 19, 2020 11:49 pm

    totally agree ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

    izzy March 20, 2020 4:19 am

    Yes the ending felt so rushed and it was just plot twists and sex scenes!! The story up until the last few chapters was beautifully drawn out and nothing felt forced or skipped over but it seems as if the author just wanted to finish the story and, I guess, provide fan service by enlarging James's tits and having him raped..
    The story up until the end was a solid 10/10, but the ending was a 2/10. I was really looking forward to the ending and it had so much potential ):

    Liz March 20, 2020 9:19 am
    Yes the ending felt so rushed and it was just plot twists and sex scenes!! The story up until the last few chapters was beautifully drawn out and nothing felt forced or skipped over but it seems as if the autho... izzy

    Right! It felt like a totally different person wrote that ending. I am so sad about it! I wish the author would take some time and write the last few chapters again ╥﹏╥