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it seems like one of those shit cliche stories at first, but it does get better. listen to the rest of the comments lol and give it a chance
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it seems like one of those shit cliche stories at first, but it does get better. listen to the rest of the comments lol and give it a chance
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He's gonna fall for the prick who turns out has a tragic and beautiful backstory and therefore deserves forgiveness and love, right? Can we have that revelation in like chapter 5? Maybe 4? The earlier the better.
Common sense says, boys that act like assholes because they "like you" don't deserve your time. Don't associate or try to "fix them", you'll just self destroy.
EDIT: chapter 6 huh? Not bad.