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more like i think the translation was something there. as the panels were ok but the conversations were not. and some times you feel that one character is talking but then he says a name n im like. What?!?! who was talking?!?
Overall, I understood the story but I couldn't really follow it (especially after ch. 2)... I don't know what it was..maybe it was the cut scenes or the pacing?
The story is mostly written on itsuki's point of view and thoughts. Which means we only have limited information on what Minato thinks about Itsuki. I appreciate that bc that's how real life works...you dont know how a person think of you. By making it like that, it fits the story bc both of them don't know how the other feels about them.
For example:
-Itsuki likes minato but he thinks minato only view him as a nobody.
-Minato likes itsuki but thinks itsuki view him as sex partner. He also sees itsuki as a "straight guy curious of gay sex"
and because of these thoughts, they jump to conclusions and misunderstand each other..which is the main part of the story.
the art is also really pretty. there is something about the way this mangaka draws (as I have seen in their previous work--hanagara tsumi). the little details/interaction tell so much about their characters...and you guys don't want to miss out on them! To read this story, you must read in-between the lines and interpret their expressions to fill in the story.