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I strongly disagree. Even thought, I don't understand why your comment got so many downvotes, it was just an opinion...
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Lol its fine, I honestly read it for the first couple and thought i completely would hate the second (cuz i usually do) but i found myself more intrigued by the second.
I like the second way more than the first, it didnt really seem to be a story with the first couple n then he just died.