This coulda been good

ApolloAresZues January 6, 2020 4:38 am

This is the first smut I wish wasn't smut. Cause if u cut out those random sex scenes(which kinda just seem to dumb this manga down and aren't the best I've seen by any means) it woulda been a cute childhood friend story. And it woulda progressed alot faster too. The guys hot, has good expressions, and has a pretty interesting job(when they aren't using it for smut purposes). The girl is cute, is confident(when he isn't smutting her up) and seems rational(her worry over her documents after the fire, her in the workspace). They look cute together too. I know this is for entertainment, but it seems almost like a waste. Like if they had just made the smut make sense, it woulda...made more sense. Idk.

Responses
    Anonymous January 6, 2020 5:57 pm

    I would recommend the artist and the beast.It has a cute storyline as of now maybe that will suit you taste more,and I also agree that the plot would be more interesting if there is more development on their relationship and not just the smut part.