About artwork

Vermass December 31, 2019 5:38 am

I thought that the art work was great (seeing the title art you could relate the title) but what I didn't liked was their expression. This was not at all telling or relating the situation (except some situation). And yes it stops adruptly. It was very good at start but it was like it's pace increased and suddenly stops with out telling any thing.

Responses
    astralsensei December 31, 2019 7:40 am

    Yeah the artwork was really unconfident in its facial expressions (especially considering the fact that the words "annoyed", "angry" and "blush" were labeled next to the character like captions.

    And the plot had a lot of potential but it lacked tension and story building to fully describe the plot.