I really don't like the ML or the FL

vera December 24, 2019 7:05 am

I couldn't read past chapter 3. Maybe the story gets better after the third chapter but it's highly unlikely. I really didn't like the ML and the FL's personalities. They aren't bad characters but I don't think they're suited for being the MC's. The male lead could have been quieter and more reserved. Considering his back story it would have made more sense if he was more traumatized or haunted by it. He went from quiet and introverted too, to upbeat and talkative. I liked his personality more when he was a child. I would also think it would have been beneficial to the story. That would have more time for the audience to grow more attached to him and see him grow into a more open person. The authors gave him a sad backstory and through him right into the story. His personality changed so quickly in only 2 chapters. They rushed it so much that it felt like they didn't put much thought into the male leads character. Also, in chapter one or two, he fights that one dude and shows how OP he is. That was way too extra and could have been better.

I also have a problem with the female leads character as well. They have her the basic love interest personality and sailed the ship from there. They should have made her more interesting. Yeah, the town hates her for some reason but that's not enough to gain people's interest. that's all I really have on the girl, she's just not that interesting so I don't have a lot to say about her.

I would talk about the story but that's a whole nother post on its own lmao

( plus it's getting late and I'm pretty tired lmao ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭)

Sorry for ranting so much about this lol. I know people find this story fun or interesting but it's just not really my preference.

TL; DR
The story and the characters aren't that good lol.

Responses
    JustAYaoiFangirl December 24, 2019 9:30 am

    Yeah I agree with you and it's a shame because the art style is good and our translators are putting in their great effort and doing baby wonderful job.

    I tried reading chapter 4 but it was so boring. Are first they tried to do a bit of character development but all of that was to move the story forward. I guess she is caring and mysterious... But that really isn't much.

    It does feel kinda like a beginners story and it has as much character development as the cringy fan fics I wrote when I was like 14 though the story isn't cringy... Just boring.

    vera December 24, 2019 9:42 am
    Yeah I agree with you and it's a shame because the art style is good and our translators are putting in their great effort and doing baby wonderful job. I tried reading chapter 4 but it was so boring. Are first... JustAYaoiFangirl

    yeeeah, I agree with you.

    JustAYaoiFangirl December 24, 2019 12:03 pm
    yeeeah, I agree with you. vera

    I guess mutual agreement.

    Mero December 25, 2019 11:52 pm

    Yes, the story is quite bland. Still waiting for something interesting to happen

    *sigh* December 27, 2019 9:00 am

    Chapter six was eh, a new character showed up. (Looked like a vampire, red eyes and blonde hair)

    MintMelon February 7, 2020 8:49 am

    Ugh yes, agreed. Im stopping at chap 4 bc theres something off abt this.. i cant quite put my finger on what it is but yeah, chapter 0 was quite interesting but as the story progressed the characters lost their flavor,,