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Yeah, actually, I like your version better
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(Sorry for the double reply, but Mangago doesn't apparently let you delete replies)
It was cute and the art was pretty but overall it was a bit meh to me, tbh. I wish the chibi vampire had stayed as a kid (while growing up the normal pace) and the uke had ended up with the other vampire (who obviously wouldn't have wanted to kill him...). Together they would have raised the little chibi vampire, the kid could've learned about his kind from the older one, and the uke's heart would have started to fill with new will to live because of the slightly delinquent brassness and protectiveness of the older vampire.
But yeah, I guess it was cute that way too, just a bit boring...