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Um there is no reason for her to want to learn martial arts then if she wasn't going to use it on the battlefield.. Also the reason she was lying in the snow was precisely because of the emotion you said wasn't evoked? If she got up from that it wouldn't evoke any emotion. So rather than using contradictory words you should have talked about the time there really was no emotion evoked: her lack of grief at her brother's funeral procession.
I applaud the people who could read up to the available chapters because I could not, for the life of me, get passed chapter 3.
The story is choppy and the panels have no flow. It makes me think there's missing pages.
Although the art is pretty, it seems a bit...to childish(? I can't describe it) And stiff, thus making it look awkward during parts that are supposed to evoke an emotion. For example, that scene in the beginning where she's lying in the snow and vowing for revenge.
First of all, no logic there because she could have just gotten up. He barely pushed you girl.
Second, where the heck did that memory of being on the battlefield come from. No context whatsoever.
Conclusion: don't read it