Cute and sexy but with deficient storytelling

sakuraxox December 10, 2019 6:33 pm

I’m mean the MCs are hot and all, I will keep reading bc I’m curious but if you are looking for a nice story don’t pick this up. I think the story doesn’t know where is going and it might change in the future but for now the blue haired MC is quite annoying and petty.

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    pigglypoof December 23, 2019 12:36 pm

    I think you're right. The author probably only knew they wanted to make a 3p story about hugos and humans, but didn't really flesh out all the small details and plot points. That's probably why it feels so shallow and haphazard.