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vuhzzo December 7, 2019 4:17 am

I love the whole story however,, there's some parts that's been concerning me (in my opinion)... First of all, her reincarnation wasn't totally dealt with, her reaction seemed bland abt remembering things about her past life. The story would've been fine w/o mentioning the whole reincarnation thing to begin with and just proceeded w/ the whole story. (Which means, it wasn't a major element at all in the story)

Another thing that bothers me is tHE WAY THEY DID ARCHERY sKSODAKFKS as person who's done archery, theY'RE HOLDING THE BOW WRONG AND THEIR AIM ISN'T FOR ACCURACY,, I mean I could let it slide but it just bothers me akdjskifkd

Welp,, I still look forward at what the story holds for us.

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    shi December 7, 2019 7:51 am

    don't worry, the archery thing anoyed me too