I really don’t like the second couple though. One looks to be twelve and acts like he’s eight. The other one looks like he is in his 40’s and seems to be in love with a child... Just... Yuck. I also miss the mirth and tone from the first chapters. They were awesome.
When I first read your comment I was like I'll read it anyway! It probably wont be thattt bad. And now I regret not paying attention, the second couple makes me feel sketched out.
When I first read your comment I was like I'll read it anyway! It probably wont be thattt bad. And now I regret not paying attention, the second couple makes me feel sketched out. DrBella
I really don’t like the second couple though. One looks to be twelve and acts like he’s eight. The other one looks like he is in his 40’s and seems to be in love with a child... Just... Yuck.
I also miss the mirth and tone from the first chapters. They were awesome.