The last chapters twist was meh

AfroChic November 29, 2019 1:12 pm

I could see the twist in the last one. Honestly though the whole thing is overcomplicated. So many ways to have solved the problem rather than his son time travel to commit murder. Also unless she is still a problem in the future why even bother?

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    AfroChic December 25, 2019 10:19 pm

    Read the story again and I see that she is. I got too excited lol. Still there are many other ways to solve the issue.