Responses
It’s fine! I respect your viewpoint. Honestly, when they were both sleeping next to each other when Uke got a cold, that was the only time I actually felt that they displayed some sort of feeling toward each other (before that disappointing ending), but it felt so off. Like, one moment the Uke is super pissed off with the Seme, and the next they’re snuggling? Strange transition... though, unfortunately, I’ve spotted this kind of crap writing in other yaoi.
Ok honestly, the drama was placed too early on. The characters did show signs of affection for one another before that I-heard-about-you-talking-shit-behind-my-back, but it was still pretty one sided to me. It would seem more natural if (there wasn’t rape and that) there was more relationship development. My growing feels for the relationship depleted. Also, that ending... how rushed. The concept of this webcomic is original and attractive, yet all it’s potential wasted...