The plot is wack and full of holes but it's a yaoi what can you expect?

Yeah but there's some yaois that have a good plot and story it's just this one that doesn't

But there's room for development so I'll just stick with this cause its interesting

I definitely wasn't implying all yaoi has a bad plot. There are many with great plots but unlike with most genres yaoi has a large amount of books that have shitty plots built around sex scenes. It's often hard to tell which category each book falls into unless you read it.

I personally favor her other work more than this particular story I hope it improves.