Responses
I agree in the first five chapters I had to give up this is the first time I’ve seen it since then and I have to give up again because it makes me mad I like the first set up the second set up with getting me a little mad and then the annoyance of him losing everything then I going everywhere else I couldn’t take it anymore
It bounced through like 5 different plot beginnings in the first 20 chaps and then didn't use any of them
Maybe I'll come back and read this some other time but right now I have storyline whiplash
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