This author has some serious problems with basic storytelling and paneling. Every story I've read has had really choppy internal monologue/dialogue, to and fro time skips, bizarre phrasing, unexplained actions by the main characters, and unresolved dangling plot threads (on the rare cases there even are plots). It isn't as bad here, but on other of their comics, their panels don't flow from left to right and top to bottom either, as sometimes the only way to make sense of what is happening is to read things is to go in a bizarre diagonal halfway and then return back to the top and then read across the bottom... just a mess all around oof
This author has some serious problems with basic storytelling and paneling. Every story I've read has had really choppy internal monologue/dialogue, to and fro time skips, bizarre phrasing, unexplained actions by the main characters, and unresolved dangling plot threads (on the rare cases there even are plots). It isn't as bad here, but on other of their comics, their panels don't flow from left to right and top to bottom either, as sometimes the only way to make sense of what is happening is to read things is to go in a bizarre diagonal halfway and then return back to the top and then read across the bottom... just a mess all around oof