I feel like the author wanted to tell a story that hasnt been told before in Yaoi and it truly feels authentic.
However I think the execution was where she missed the mark.
It wasn't paced properly. She could have cut the beginning a little bit and became more creative in telling the story instead of making it so straight forward.
Also that ending arc, it's really rushed. I feel like the ending could have been stretched and properly explored like I'm not happy that Taeyul's abusive side wasn't fully settled and I feel like we need more scene with Taeyul and Soohan.
Still, I commend her for telling something unique and I enjoyed very much.
The story is really good.
I feel like the author wanted to tell a story that hasnt been told before in Yaoi and it truly feels authentic.
However I think the execution was where she missed the mark.
It wasn't paced properly. She could have cut the beginning a little bit and became more creative in telling the story instead of making it so straight forward.
Also that ending arc, it's really rushed. I feel like the ending could have been stretched and properly explored like I'm not happy that Taeyul's abusive side wasn't fully settled and I feel like we need more scene with Taeyul and Soohan.
Still, I commend her for telling something unique and I enjoyed very much.