I mean very fast paced.....rushed upIt's like you started a story like Once upon a time a boy danced in the Rain. The next day, he died due to pneumonia. The End.I found this series way too childish so far. But seeing that it's the end, you can do better in your next work author!
THE EXAMPLE, I CANT BREATH- LMAOO
I can't stop laughing
I mean very fast paced.....rushed up
It's like you started a story like Once upon a time a boy danced in the Rain. The next day, he died due to pneumonia. The End.
I found this series way too childish so far. But seeing that it's the end, you can do better in your next work author!