What bothers me the most about this story is how Kaede's late mother emphasize that 'someone' will come to save her if she's suffering instead of encouraging her to seek help and talk to other people. Because of what her mother said, she become more miserable. However, I'm glad that as the story goes, we see her becoming stronger and have more courage. Also, I think there could've been more development on the male character. As it is now, we don't really know much about his point of view or just his character in general. I blame him quite a bit for Rin's clingy behavior, because he should've encourage her to not overly rely on him and socialize more, instead of giving all his attention to her. Oh well this is a long rant, but this story could have soo much more potential ╮(￣▽￣)╭
What bothers me the most about this story is how Kaede's late mother emphasize that 'someone' will come to save her if she's suffering instead of encouraging her to seek help and talk to other people. Because of what her mother said, she become more miserable. However, I'm glad that as the story goes, we see her becoming stronger and have more courage. Also, I think there could've been more development on the male character. As it is now, we don't really know much about his point of view or just his character in general. I blame him quite a bit for Rin's clingy behavior, because he should've encourage her to not overly rely on him and socialize more, instead of giving all his attention to her. Oh well this is a long rant, but this story could have soo much more potential ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I really like the second story though hehe