man the story would've been so good if they just stopped putting these super unnecessary p...

gaywildcat September 19, 2019 4:02 pm

man the story would've been so good if they just stopped putting these super unnecessary parts
like cheating for literal no reason and "liking" people you actually don't like?? (the funny part is that the cheating doesn't even make sense or add something to the plot, it's just there. you could literally take all the pages with the random cheating and them fighting bc of it and add more pages of them deepening their relationships with their lovers and friends and this would've been 1000times better)
also by the end of the story it was really hard to like any of the characters bc not only they don't act like real people, but they act like they don't think
I'm not kidding I felt like the author just put some parts there have the "angst" everyone "loves", but it really just looks like bad writing

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    shika May 8, 2020 12:11 pm

    Haillll. I felt exactly the same . They say they don't like those people but after sleeping with them suddenly likes them and etc.