This was decent until say the last 6/7 chapters. Then everything moved so fast; Kengo died...

JGS September 17, 2019 6:53 pm

This was decent until say the last 6/7 chapters. Then everything moved so fast; Kengo died randomly; Akira (and everyone else) was barely affected by his death and there were no real consequences for Homurabi. I think the last few chapters were a cop out to be honest. I’d be fine with these plot points if the chapters were not so rushed and more explanation given/ emotions shown. Unfortunately it’s just a bit messy.

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