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Thanks for the honest opinion! ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Did u pay though lmao
Noup, and that Didn’t stop me from giving my opinion that seemed to have bothered you enough to comment, great for me.
didn't think this is a no comment platform but sure i guess
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This story... I didn’t really liked it, it’s rushed, I know the autor said they wanted something short but that was not really short just rushed and WTFkish, let’s see:
The main couple didn’t had enough time to fall in love,
The secondary love story is more credible than the first cuz we could think the demon got obsessed, fixated with the idea of turn that corrupted soul that didn’t want him his, and plenty of time went by so he had enough time to groom those feelings and mistake them for love;
The serial killer scene went in and out too fast, we don’t even know what he said when he turned himself in, or how did the police got him, and we didn’t see the evidences... there are so many lose ends that makes me more angry than satisfied;
I couldn’t tell if the doctor quit his job or if they just moved out of the city, I felt like I don’t even know why did the demon fell in love, because of the idea of eternal love? I really didn’t see anything that would explain such big and fast love;
From the way they mentioned their superior... it made me get that taste of “I want more” in my mouth, I would’ve loved to see the boss, I think that the most pleasant thing was the extra story cuz it made much more sense.
The best parts on the story are the beginning, witch seemed to be loose and fun and the end who was sad, heavy and realistic in the way that once you lose your loved one you really start forgetting EVERYTHING abaout that person, the smell, the walk, the voice, all small and bigger things gone, that’s why it’s important to take pictures and make videos of precious moments, and the way the author portrayed his numbness and lack of motivation to keep goin is perfect and realistic, that not happy ending was ideal, we can’t always have what we want;
And can we talk about the really bad sex positions angles? They were so bad I felt like I could read that besides my mother since it was such a turn off for the most parts, you can barely see anything.
Out of 10 I give this a 4 and that’s a stretch because I’m feeling nice today.
Sorry if I seem rude but for this is a work that is payed and I would be mad to pay for this because I would hope to see something like the first episode.